Term 3 Goals Assessment

My goal for term three is to: Make my stories more interesting.

I think that I have achieved my goal for the term because I have added more adjectives to my writing. I will continue to work on this for the rest of the year.

He Mihi

Kia Ora,

Ko maungataniwha me maugnapohatu ok maugna

Ko Tapapa me waikaremoana oku awa

Ko ngapuhi me tahoe oku iwi

Ko Ogilvey me Gordan oku clan

Ko Taipari to ingoa whanau

Ko mangamuka me uwhiarae oku marae

Ko Joseph toku ingoa

No Otautahi ahau

Kia Ora

Zone's Soccer

The three little elephants and the big bad ant

In a far far away land there were three little elephants called Rory,jamie and carlito.right on the other side of the world there was this big bad ant called Rascal.it was on the beach. Rascal was on his way home and he got lost and he was on elephants terrritory. The three little elephants spotted rascal on his territory. Rory went to rascal and said hop off or else i will hurt you. he did not listen to them and went face to face and had a animal fight because elephants dont like ants. they tell him to be there slave for a week. After he becomes there slave for the rest of the week they become best friends. They all lived happily ever after.

HOW TO MAKE JUICE

The kid love juice because it has loads of sugar like lollies. First of all you grab the jug and the juice
dont forget that. Second we poor the waterin and then get the juice and well your pooringit in you gat the stirer
and stir it untillall of the juice is gone, Theres your juice right there simple as that.

WHY SHOULD U TAKE YOUR SHOES OFF BEFORE U ENTER

So that u dont get the house dirty.Harder for mum. You can do better stuff than cleaning up dirt. If visitors came they will think its dirty. You might trip over a pile of dirt and get hurt. Get told off and get grounde or you can get more chores.

cinquan poetry

BEARS
LIKE SNOW
AND HAVE FIGHTS.
ONE BIG TOUGH THING.
FAT

Feedback from Rob

Dear Joseph
I’m really impressed to hear that you feel you are working more and getting more out of your learning than you have in the past. This is an important step towards becoming an independent person who manages their learning. It is cool to work hard and learn things!

You are really positive about your reading and the AVAILLL programme is really interesting to you and you are having fun with it. Your writing is going well and you tell me that you are writing more, plus you know where it is and can look back on it. Make sure you share your learning with Mum, Dad and me using your portfolio - that will also help.

Tino pai to mahi.