Term 3 Goals Assessment

My goal for term three is to: Make my stories more interesting.

I think that I have achieved my goal for the term because I have added more adjectives to my writing. I will continue to work on this for the rest of the year.

He Mihi

Kia Ora,

Ko maungataniwha me maugnapohatu ok maugna

Ko Tapapa me waikaremoana oku awa

Ko ngapuhi me tahoe oku iwi

Ko Ogilvey me Gordan oku clan

Ko Taipari to ingoa whanau

Ko mangamuka me uwhiarae oku marae

Ko Joseph toku ingoa

No Otautahi ahau

Kia Ora

Zone's Soccer

The three little elephants and the big bad ant

In a far far away land there were three little elephants called Rory,jamie and carlito.right on the other side of the world there was this big bad ant called Rascal.it was on the beach. Rascal was on his way home and he got lost and he was on elephants terrritory. The three little elephants spotted rascal on his territory. Rory went to rascal and said hop off or else i will hurt you. he did not listen to them and went face to face and had a animal fight because elephants dont like ants. they tell him to be there slave for a week. After he becomes there slave for the rest of the week they become best friends. They all lived happily ever after.